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CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT

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The pale and splitting
Light lies gentle
Across her steaming brow.

White, it's surrounding
The curving tepid
Tears of murder now.

Yearning
Twisting
Turning
Burning.

Falling into her star.
 
Fantastic piece,

it has an underlying optimistic tone about it though it isn't completely obvious perhaps at first. It reminds me of Parabola as far as imagery is concerned. You have an admirable vision - a divinely dynamic piece.
 
WOW! I can't remember how many times I've said that to you...you say so much with so little words...wonderful piece..

I'm just awaiting your next!
 
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