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you pretty much summed up a position I am in right now, plus made me think about it clearly for the first time in a while, so thankyou. Plus, I really like how it's written...
In fact
I have decided
to carry nothing at all.

Even water
I can find on my way,
and the words I will say –
I have no pockets
for a script.
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the first changes the tone of the piece soooo nicely... it's like as soon as the answer is provided all the 'bad blood' leaves the poem; and then 'even water' it so sharp and painful... it's the perfect symbol... leading into the perfect way of explaining your answer. seriously wow! :)
 
knight_marshall said:
seriously wow!
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Agreed.

This poem is like aged aged cheddar: simple, honest... no wait, cheese doesn't carry those qalities. I meant sharp, with a good bite and a pleasant aftertaste :D
 
EntrenchdMentalist said:
This poem is like aged aged cheddar: simple, honest... no wait, cheese doesn't carry those qalities. I meant sharp, with a good bite and a pleasant aftertaste :D
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LOL! Thanks! I actually wrote this yesterday... it all came to me very quickly, without the need for tinkering. :)
 
If I could live the ideals of this poem life would be perfect. Wordy, you have become my favourite Words poet. I hope I get to see a live performance of at least one of these when I move to Melbourne.
 
omg UAN... that just gave me the best idea for a bluelight meetup that i'd actually go to... a poetry recital night... i know there are bars around melb that do them... hell, I've seen one on channel 31 (which had one of the cooooooolest poems I have ever heard on it... i'd fkn marry that chick even if i hadn't seen her!)

the only question is... would there be interst, and availability... off to the research book robin!

and wordy... the fact that you wrote this just the other day... *sigh*... i swear you stole those words from my head when i needed them...
 
Seriously man. What ever happened to finding our way? But nooooooooo, weee have to have water faucets sprouting out of our asses and clocks hanging from our nostrils.
 
^ Haha, exactly! (literally?!)

knight_marshall, I'd definitely be up for organising some kind of Melbourne Words meetup. I actually have a venue in mind.

Can we tie it in to fulfil up all night's wish, or is the move to Melbourne a long way off?
 
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