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Angelight

Angelight

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How that night i could not sleep a wink.
Like most nights.
I cried again.
When u reached down to grab my heart, and i let you.
You played my deck like it was war, you always had the ace.
I lost again.
You held me close, like it was the last time i would ever see you.
Maybe it would be or could be.
I became steel again.
You breathed my air like you didn't have your own to breathe.
I layed my life on that table for you.
I became weak again.
You sifted through the sand looking for what was me.
I helped you search for it too.
I became bold.
You read my mind like a book.
Too bad u didn't study me hard enough.
I became smarter than you.
You folded away all of the past and left it to burn.
I watched it set on fire.
I became the flame.
You put your hands on me again.
I let you engage in me.
I became innocent.
For once i was everything, i was me.
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"Try my exctasy...
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[This message has been edited by Angelight (edited 04 August 2000).]
 
Sometimes the only person you can trust and be there for you is yourself. It is nice though to know there are ppl that are n your life that will give a helping hand!
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HUGZ
 
that was fabulous ! ( wink)
but honestly that was very heart wrenchingly beautiful.
I love the such open soulness you expressed and the exsposure of innocents !
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen
 
Angelight, you described it to a T! I'm glad you finally figured out how to "trump" his ass! I finally did too! Your poem hit so close to home for me. It gave me goosebumps when i read it! I can't even explain to you how fast that made my heart beat!!!!!!! It's an excellent piece-thanks for sharing!
~Take Care~BBL
 
..."I layed my life on that table for you.
I became weak again."...
Sweet Angelight. The BIGGEST gift, the MOST TREASURED of it all, the most intimate of presents one can give to another human being is his/her Vulnerability.
Most often, it's reciprocated by pain which is then replaced by wisdom.
ANd I don't EVER think it's never worth it all
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) Cause atleast you came out a winner. Atleast YOU felt love, even if not loved back
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at that very moment. But you know what? You're most beautiful because of it all.
Loads of luvs,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
[This message has been edited by writnpage (edited 05 August 2000).]
 
"For once i was everything, i was me."-Angelight.
Rejoice and celebrate life even if all you feel is pain.
Life sux..but atleast beautiful poetry comes out of it!
Loads of luvs,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
 
Angel,
I can't believe I missed this! How very beautiful.
As I read it, something struck me...an epiphany of sorts, I guess.
"You read my mind like a book.
Too bad u didn't study me hard enough.."
Isn't it odd that when other people study us, they only see the here and now? It's like they skipped to the last few pages of a book...a book that is us. Therefore, they miss out on all that came before and contributed to what and who we are today.
Just random thoughts. As always, I love your work! Can't wait to give you big hugs for this piece and ALL you truly are.
Caress
 
cindy i can't wait to give u a big fat hug! only 1 more week!! almost
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u know how much your input means to me
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i luv u sister
much love
ange
[This message has been edited by Angelight (edited 22 August 2000).]
 
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