i want to leave

[skyalf]

o father, wind of the north
send an arrow into my eyes
o darkness, mother of frost
let me live again
under the shroud of ice

unfold the wings of reflections
and cast me into the night
show me my ruined home
and burn all that i left behind

o mother
strip me of all my senses
you who taught me to feel
extinguish my empty thoughts
i want to forget, i want to leave

o father
bring me to limbo
there i'll stay crowned in stars
to never forget, to always remember
and ever to feel under the network of scars





skjalff

 

[vurtomatic]

Hmmm ... interesting piece

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Timeless! I think we have all felt ugly and wanted to be away from the world for a while, I see you have lost none of your skill. Such intense imagery.

 

[cherub]

agreed with the above ^^^^
fantastic write i must say.... you never seem to amaze me,,,, the way i can relate to what you write..

 

[lostNfound]

I liked this piece but even reading i had to change limbo to purgatory and mother needs a name like father was wind of the north.
loved where you went with this though.

 

[Mehm]

very nordic..
its a sad work. If you feel this way towards your parents, I hope you can eventually find peace