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Traumatizd4life

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"Oh my god"
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I remember what happened
It was just yesterday
The president screaming
somone will pay
The buildings collapse
What was it for
What will be next
will it be war
Over seas we bomb
as citizens have to run
but An enemy strikes home
and something must be done
"We will hunt them down"
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noone knows the answer
or why we all are dead
but it all breaks down to one thing
What our great president went and said.
"This has been an act of war"
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Very nicely written!
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Yay..i love support of course you can...!! yayy.sorry i just like people reading my stuff as an aspiring writer.(i think im gonna write those little rhymes on greeting cards those are so easy.)
 
I wanted it to be longer or cut it with the actual presidents speech..and have more quotes..but well im not that technical.
 
There's something I want to ask you about this... was it supposed to be an imagining of the voice of the many more that would be killed if we did indeed declare war? Because that's how I read "no one knows the answer / or why we all are dead ... what our great president went and said" thing.. and that's what I thought was so good here, the poignant vibe of "why did you kill more, return death for death when you surely knew it would only return death back once more?"
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Yah i was warning against what may happen if we take this to far..Retaliation is one thing but obsession is another.
 
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