I love you

[skyalf]

please meet the neolith sunrise with me
standing above the sea of silk
in electrifying light of the very last morning

please let me hide inside your soul
so you could sleep within me silently smiling
in the light of a thousand summers

I love you

i would gladly go blind this very moment
to see your radiant smile bloom once again
giving life to a trillion flowers

your heavenly smile and your freckles
in a god-sent rainbow of million colors
if I'd stay alive and forgotten inside your eyes

I'd still love you

I'll stay with you as you weave your soul into mine
into my memories of you as bright as i can remember
as you alone could see me for what I were

we'll never get lost through the dreams we've had
they will return to us one day beyond all of life's turmoils
and the winds will blow ever so tender

I love you

in the pit of existence
in the darkest of tangles
through the burning forests
and crematorium smoke
in the past and in future
that is yet to unravel
and to show us that nothing
will ever come to unfold
through the mists of prophetic
words of ignorant blabber
and illiterate elders
and all of their wise words
cos' the sun is undying
for the ones that keep trying
to secure whats taken
and that which is lost
in the world that is aging
as the moon keeps on going
always round and round
and the day turns to night
but the feelings so gentle
same emotions so tender
and the morning will never
make the light do us part





skjalff

 

[yakksoho]

This is one of the most deeply moving and eloquently beautiful things I have ever read on this forum.

 

[(Wordy)]

Yes, there is definitely a beautiful feeling at work here.

please meet the neolith sunrise with me
standing above the sea of silk
in electrifying light of our last morning

What an opening!

And the ending has such conviction. Convinction of love! Like Donne...

"For love, all love of other sights controules,
And makes one little roome, an every where."

 

[cherub]

a true piece about love,, I know yours has gone through the trails of life,, more so,, what a beautiful piece !

 

[Raz]

we'll never get lost through the dreams we've had
they will return to us one day beyond all of life's turmoils
and the winds will blow ever so tender

I liked this...it's nice to read something so beautiful without any hint of sadness or darkness.

This piece made me feel warm inside.

 

[LouReed]

i wanna take drugs with skyalf

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Man this was good, I loved the two parts of it, the first felt dreamy and beautiful, the second snaked its way as if love was flying past all the things you mentioned and rising above them all.

I'm going to be coming back to this a lot!

 

[stereobutton]

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