I Just Wanna Be Me...My first piece since my bout with writers block...

[MisterPoetry]

I wanna be the breeze
Everywhere and nowhere at once
To hop and skip without feet
I wanna be frozen unthawed and refreezed
Bouncing back and forth between the two extremes
To embrace the cold and snuggle with the heat
I wanna be diseased
only to be cured and know heartache plus happiness
So I can totally enjoy lifes little treats
I wanna totally ignore the signs and feed the beast
To set him free
And watch him enjoy his own feast
I wanna reach out way out of outs reach
To actually make the world more beautiful
Maybe to comb the beach
I wanna honestly feel peace
Not just a lil piece but a whole big piece of peace
To be able to embrace my neighbors
The way i embrace my niece
I wanna make the negativity cease
Make everyone shake hands with no crossies
Buy every woman and man a coffee
To make it ok to abolish the word sorry
I wanna be released
From this grip this hold this clenched fist
I wanna let go of this echo
Without having to echo a cry from being let go
I just wanna be me...
[ 24 February 2003: Message edited by: MisterPoetry ]

 

[Nik137]

I like this. Comparisons always work well with poetry.
nice work