I haven't written anything for about a year

[EntrenchdMentalist]

The train's finally moving.
Everyone looks like they're about to cry.
So do you.
I saw muscles tonight.
We need to do something with our lives,
we're not children anymore.
Music plays and now you're smiling.
And she's over him.
And i'm alone.
What if my purpose was to inspire just one song?
Would the rest of my life be pointless?
What is your kidney for?
See? Red hair, bronze skin.
Where did it all begin?
Enough with the questions, I'm a member of a crowd.
More than an Army, i mean no harmy.
That.
Boy.
Is.
A joke, get it?
You are my inspiration, life.
Do you want a copy?
You could have an original if only I knew your name.
It's a shame you're still touching and I'm still writing.
Perhaps we could have made a connection,
or you with my erection.
And her woes are forgotten; MUSIC heals all wounds.
A smile is never enough.
He's pretty but you're worth more than just a picture.
A thousand words can't change...
You're mine.

 

[Raz]

I like.

This feels like the kind of piece that takes on much more meaning when you go away from a bit then come back and read it fresh.

 

[Anasrequiem]

i like this alot, very thought provoking, and well yep i like it.

 

[(Wordy)]

Woo! you fell off the wagon... were you pushed? I guess I'm always interested in what pushes people to start writing, and especially what pushes people to start writing again after hiatus.

Do you want a copy?

I love the jump, the way this bursts in after 'You are my inspiration, life'. Strike the juxtapose!