THERE IS a place more often than not, that a poem is beautiful and sad.,, and it makes me soo glad... yet i wait and pause and think about how simple words of intellegence can make u think
I really like most of this, but I think the repeated line would be more effective if it was used only at the beginning of the poem and then repeated before the last couplet.
Seriously, I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for posting it. And the presentation is actually pretty sick