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I hate titling poems and art... so here you go

Housekid5

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Peace!
 
I really like most of this, but I think the repeated line would be more effective if it was used only at the beginning of the poem and then repeated before the last couplet.
Seriously, I enjoyed reading this. :) Thanks for posting it. And the presentation is actually pretty sick :)
 
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