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And so here we are again
Trying hard to pretend we don’t know we’re running in circles
And this
This happens a lot
But we’re slowly getting better at being someone else.
The hand you’re trying hard to break
Is holding fast to the hope you thought you dropped
Somewhere between the broken heart and the bed gone cold.
It’s so important to be important
To the one who makes you smile
Even when they hold secrets on their lips
And never tell you what they’re really thinking.
Because we’re all alone
In the end
It’s just that some of us deal better with empty spaces
And a broken melody.
I want someone to make me cry
Just so I know
I can fall in love again.
Play my song
Play my song
Play my song
Because I want to grow up and fuck up and buck up and shut up
The voices in my head that say
You’ll never look my way.
 
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Originally posted by up all night
Play my song
Play my song
Play my song
Because I want to grow up and fuck up and buck up and shut up
The voices in my head that say
You’ll never look my way.

^I can imagine this as a song..
Very very nice, I really enjoyed this piece. Took me on a gritty, sad journey.

All of your pieces are so full of honesty. <3
 
Every piece i read of yours brings a million emotions and feelings to me, that circulate through my blood. You make me feel yarn; and for that i thank you.

Your writing truly is superb. <3
 
^^^ that same quote up there gets me
i have been there also.

Wonderful writting girl everytime i read your stuff i seem to relate or have symphetic value to it. awesome !
 
up all night said:

I want someone to make me cry
Just so I know
I can fall in love again.
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eventually it will happen :)

you write with such depth and emotion and sometimes i wonder if you are crying urself when you write things like this.

they say the best peices (mostly) come from where the most emotion is. because its easily familarised with...

you are the best
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cherub said:
Wonderful writting girl everytime i read your stuff i seem to relate or have symphetic value to it. awesome !
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Well... not the everytime i read your stuff part, cos this is the first piece ive read of yours but thats exactly how i feel too - to some parts i can relate and to some i feel symphetic value to. through the simplistic honesty in your words you encapsulate humanity very well. good work girl :)
 
love how this was written and i can relate to a lot of it.

"It’s so important to be important
To the one who makes you smile"
Reminds me of some lyrics from an old scooter album - 'is nice to be important, but its more important to be nice'.

i like how youve written all about experiences, emotions and feelings that everyone goes through and could realte to easily in their own way. yet its still obviously a personal piece.
well done.
 
I must have missed this...

"It's so important to be important to the one the makes you smile."

Amen.

You manage to see the truth of matters with a simplicity and rawness that few others can. You're poetic, but you knew that already :D
 
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