i had to...

[day_for_night]

i had to do it
too much
it was just too much

i had to do it
blinding me with pain and agony
it was the only way to be free

i had to do it
you couldnt see a good thing staring you
right in your beautiful face

i had to do it
before it consumed me
because it would have

i had to do it
and now you seem
the more upset of me and you

are you sure you know what you want?

 

[cherub]

first * waves hello*

I like this piece,,,
with out the mushy and big words,you have put alot of heart into this. Very straight forward.

I like very much !!!!

 

[Furnace]

v. good, d_f_n.

 

[day_for_night]

*waves back to cherub*

thanks alot, i am glad someone liked it...i dont really consider myself a talented writer at all, this just poured out...