i don't like you...

[muzby]

i don't like you..
i don't know what it is about you..
nothing in particular..
i just don't like you..

so, i'm going to make it my life's work to destroy everything you create..
to watch when you are happy, and to work out sneaky, cunning ways to shatter that happiness..
to go behind your back and quietly erode any good work you do...

i look at you with distain..
although you won't realise it by looking at me..
cause on the surface, everything seems good between us..
and any time you ask, i'll tell you it is...

secretly, i enjoy watching you succeed..
but have a sordid satisfaction when you fail..
secretly feeling that i am superior to whatever you think you can be..

but my only thing i don't like about me..
is that i am you...

 

[*~Giggles~*]

Damn, don't hate yourself.

 

[katmeow]

My own worst enemy... know the feeling.

Hope things are going ok.

xx

 

[lostNfound]

dude, its not all bad.
what you wrote is kinda cool bit so narcissistic.
its not all bad.

 

[cherub]

maybe this piece is the first step... good writting though

 

[TheLoveBandit]

Agreed, good writing.

 

[up all night]

On my more cynical days I think the people who like themselves don't know themselves at all.

 

[RareForm]

^notable insight. i wrote something like this a while back. i'm with you. things'll get better.. of that i'm sure.

 

[wesmdow]

captivating.

 

[Mehm]

great piece, I hope its not true.