I Cascade With Love.

[Altered_Soul9]

I sat alone with you by my side.
Yes alone with a living presence.
A hateful feeling blowing an unwanted breath of life into me.
Senseless rambling in and around my brain.
I seem to soak up the negative energy from it all.
I wish this to vanish.
Into the air, far away from my troubled and lonely heart.
A faint sound emits from my mind.
A song...
~~Show me the way, I'll follow the drones~~
If only I could follow instead of lead.
If only I could find instead of search.
If only life were as sarcastic as my dear friends words.
*sigh* let my troubled mind worry you not.
Not even the closest soul to me this very instance feels my hate.
Yet this loving friend knows all to well my pains and anguishes.
Love is something that can be found, love is something that can be gained, but even love~and honestly I could be wrong~ can't tie a life to another.
So maybe the drones will come again,
And whisk me away with their deceptive lullabies.
In time she will know.

 

[RareForm]

In time indeed. this was frickin' perfect. talk about raw emotion. sheesh! that line is sarcastic, but we are all victims of even that which we do not wish.

 

[Painless Hurt]

I really like this piece. It very raw as the Bler above me said.

 

[Pantomime7]

you are correct my moollalite friends. This piece is raw and emotional. Great write AS9.

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

Very awsome write. I love how you word things. You and Drew have a way of making it fee like you are being pulled into the words. Bye.