I Care Little For What Stones Have To Say

[RareForm]

Galloping horses gaining ground
hoofbeats in stereo
Charging mount,
take me away
from where
I've been all day.

And if you say,
please, reconsider, and stay
the time for that
was many moons ago
so say the runes;
easy for stones to say.


Be patient, they advise,
one day comes your time.
Walk your horse
at a slow gait
Little do they know
already I grow old
Opportunity passed me over
and did not wait.

So to this day
I care little
for what stones have to say.

 

[knight_marshall]

i absolutely love it
it even starts off in a form then moves, along with its point, into freedom. truly, i love it
i don't know if that double break is on purpose, but even it adds to the whole thing... much

 

[up all night]

I love how this piece ended. You have a way with words my good man.

 

[Amanita Mary]

This piece wraps up very nicely for me... like a present. I like the second pause, and how it keeps changing until the end. Me gusta

 

[(Wordy)]

Great stuff, Drew!

 

[yakksoho]

This is beautiful, strong, hits a personal chord and frees semantic tension simultaneous.
I thoroughly, repeatedly, enjoy this.

 

[Raz]

Be patient, they advise,
one day comes your time.
Walk your horse
at a slow gait
Little do they know
already I grow old
Opportunity passed me over
and did not wait.

Been there...I like the way you describe that feeling of missed opportunity so neatly..

 

[colicolo]

very smooth, very imaginable, very very cool