I can tell

[BREAKaBEAT]

I can tell
That you love me
Everyday
When you say
'Move Closer'
I do not.
Then you move
Closer, still.

 

[Mehm]

very poignant. thank you for sharing.

 

[BREAKaBEAT]

No problems. I rather thought it was a stroke of genius, and probably one of the most brilliant pieces of writing I have ever read. But thats ok.

 

[(Wordy)]

^ lol!

I like it. It's direct and says so much so effortlessly.