Humanity Consumes Earth (reads forward & backwards)

[Dezamasezon]

Humanity
Consumes Earth
Depleting forever: air.
Minds Thinking Away, Burning,
Thought after thought.
Existence breeds death, decay
Bacteria festering nauseatingly
Life
Consumes
Life.
Nauseatingly festering bacteria:
Decay: death breeds existence.
Thought after thought,
Burning away thinking minds.
Air, forever depleting,
Earth consumes
Humanity.

tis called a palindrome

love? like? dislike? hate?

feedback appreciated

 

[New]

The time put into this more than justifies the end result. It displays the never ending string of lives we all depend on.

 

[(Wordy)]

This is immense. A brilliant use of form.

Had you read other poems written this way before writing it?

 

[ResinTeeth]

tis called a palindrome

To be precise it is not a palindrome. This is a palindrome:

All erotic, I lose lame female solicitor Ella.

But still it's a good piece

 

[Mehm]

I really enjoy any art dealing with the cycle of life. It is infinitely fascinating. One note however is that air is actually not depleted on earth

 

[Raz]

Wow, great work dude! Very clever fitting the theme to the way it's written! Kudos!

 

[boredandfloored]

definately very interesting. good penmanship.

 

[WhiteLinesNcoffee]

I be IMPRESSED.

Just kidding But seriously, that was pretty damn good