How quickly it all turns

[Web]

Skin soft as rose petals
full lips, utterly kissable
hair like silk that goes on forever
eyes of ice blue
the smile of a child
Angelic visage, so sweet and true
the body of a goddess, curves soft and smooth
every last perfect detail, carved out of clouds

How quickly it all turns,
cold as ice, cold as stone…
rigid as mahogany, every touch wooden
thoughts like a rockslide,
words lash out like a steel tipped whip
movement like a wildfire,…
sweeping through the forests of my soul
Leaving a scarred, blackened wasteland.

 

[Bi KaNd*E* RaVeR]

very good use of words and giving visuals christian

i love it

*muah*

 

[Web]

You know, I'm against people bumping their own posts... but dammit, this one only got 37 veiws and one reply and I was hoping for a little more feedback.

BTW, thanks Jen.

 

[LinZ-E]

very nice. sad. Isn't it so terrible how some people can change from being the warmest person in the world to the coldest? Time can change alot about (or between) someone (people). Just another life lesson, as painful as it may be.
((hug))

 

[bisKi]

*hugs web*

I like the way how you expressed innocence which transformed into a destructive form that leaves all 'damaged' behind - so true of some people in real life.

Nice work

 

[frostyangel]

hey you .... get down here to visit real soon ... k *frosty*