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"Hot Ass Lesbian Shit" sex scene

psychedelicsoul

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This is a sex scene taken from Chapter 2 of my story, "Hot Ass Lesbian Shit"... It's called that because it contains hot ass lesbian shit. So it's only fitting it be called that. Critiques and tips on improving would be appreciated.

When we arrived at the door, we cooled down so my parents won’t get suspicious. As usual we made our small talk to my parents. We went on about how much fun we had at the ice skating rink. I wanted to get it over with. I felt those vibes. Those sweet vibrations all across my body. I couldn't blame it on alcohol. I was horney, and I hungered for her body. I was going to make sweet love to her tonight.

After all of that, we went back to my room and locked the door. I was ready to release those sweet horny sensations all through my body. I rested down on the body. She said, “let me give you a foot massage”
“Sure sweetie”, I replied.

She began to slip off my shoes. I felt so free at that moment. The soreness of my feet was no issue. She began pressing her fingers all over my feet. I expected it to tickle, but it didn’t. I’m sure she had experience with this before. Because I felt so calm and relaxed. She used just the right amount of pressure on the balls of my feet. She ran her fingers in between my toes as she gently massaged them one by one. I looked down and saw her face pressed right against my foot. She took a big, strong whiff and said, “you smell so good sweetie”
“I wanna know how you smell baby”

She let out a nice subtle smile as she laid a kiss down on the bottom of my foot. She rapidly kissed my feet all over. The feeling was so sensual. My lower regions were already throbbing. I fantasized about what she was going to do to my pussy. I could already feel it getting wetter as she continued. She ran her warm tongue from my heel to my toes. She began kissing my ankle as I laid there. I closed my eyes and focused on the sensations of her moving up my leg.

She said, “It’s getting pretty hot right now”
“I know baby”
“Let me cool you down.”
It was about this moment when she was on her knees on top of the bed. She began to pull my skirt down. I could feel the cloth going down my legs. I was left with nothing but my blouse and my panties. She rested her face against my leg and smelled me. “Your pussy smell just like I imagined”
“I can imagine”
She laughed and said, “I wanna know how it feels.”

Soon she was kissing and licking my thighs. I knew i’d have a hickey there, but I could care less. Her mouth felt so good on my body. Her head was probably less than an inch away from my pussy. I felt her hands carrassing my bottocks and waste. She rubbed me down in a circular motion. I could feel my pussy throbbing. She look hold of my panties and began pulling them right on down to my feet.

She began selling them fiercely. It was like she wanted to inhale them. She tossed them up in the air and gave me the sexiest look I’d ever seen. As she stared right down between my legs, I could sense her hungry eyes.I was sitting there exposed. I had my shirt, but my bare legs and pussy were right out in the open.

She laid down on her stomach with her head right in between my legs. I had never seen a brighter smile, she was excited to taste me. I leaned back and closed my eyes. I felt her tongue gently massage my pussy. I didn't want to alert my parents, so I didn't moan. But it was hard not to. I was breathing hard and my heart was racing. With each stroke of her tongue endless pleasure entered me.

I felt her increase speed. She started off licking me slowly. Her lips pressed against my pussy as she sucked and plunged her tongue inside me. There were waves of euphoria all through me. She wiggled her tongue through me faster. I wasn’t sure if she was inexperienced. Because she found my clit pretty fast. I was holding back not to make a sound, but inside I was ready to scream and shout. All I could see when I looked down was her sweet green eyes and long lashes. Her mouth was almost all the way in my pussy. Her tongue was so deep as it rubbed up against my clit.

I felt myself getting wet. She would let out a sweet little moan. She must have enjoyed my taste as the juices began to flow. Inside I was begging for more. Her warm tongue instilled great pleasure against my pussy. I placed my hand on the back of her head and brought her in closer, increasing the pleasure. My body, particularly my abdomen began to swell up with sweet pleasure. I was about to let loose, so I did. I came right there. My pussy was so wet, and it released sweet juices. I was in such pleasure. I let out slight moans as I released everything. She continued licking me, as to gushed out all my sweet juices.

She wasn’t gonna stop until she sucked up every drop of squirt I had. “Such a tasty girl”. she said. As she licked me clean she thrusted forward. I saw the drops of vaginal cum on her tongue. As we frenched kissed, I tasted my own sweet juices. Every bit of it was sweet and delicious. I looked down and saw her sitting on her knees. Still fully clothed, she had her hand up her skirt fingering herself.

I placed my hands on her shoulders and pushed her down on the bed. I plunged my tongue in hers and we locked in a sweet embrace. I wanted to experience her body. I decided I wanted to see her totally naked. I began unbuttoning her shirt, one button at a time. As her thick cleavage began to reveal itself, I felt a sweet sensation. Once her shirt was undone, I went for her bra. I slowly unbuttoned it and removed it, revealing her large supple breast.

I began sucking on them. I massaged her right nipple with my tongue. Her breast were so smooth, and they simply melted in my mouth. I did the same to her left tit. My senses were going crazy, the sight of her breast made my pussy tremble. I ran my face in between them. I wanted to lick her head to toe, but the breast were the sweetest part, next to her tasty pussy. There was a sweet smell coming from them. I still hand my hands caressing her sweet boobs as I ran my tongue down her stomach.

I was so curious about what pussy tasted like. Personally I believe each one has a different taste. It’s just nature. No, two vaginas have the same taste. I ran my hands softly from her hips to the pelvis. I had the sensation of pulling down her skirt. The most exiciting part of foreplay is stipping your parner naked. I was determined to see what she looked like totally exposed.

She was topless and I was looking down at her bright neon pink panties. I grabbed them and pulled them right on down her legs. She smiled and giggled as this happened. She was biting her right thumbnail in excitement. She was waiting for me to go down on her. And I was pretty anxious too. I took a big whiff. They had the most entrancing smell. I thought, “Was this what pussy tasted like? I should have got into girls long ago.” I put her panties in my mouth and tasted her sweet sweaty pussy indirectly.

Before I took a taste of them, I decided to see how pussy felt. A girls vagina is soft, and sweet. The texture is perfect. I could feel it in my two fingers. In a way, just by fingering her, I felt the same pleasure I felt when she went down on me earlier. I wanted to lick her over and over again, and now I got my chance. I could not anticipate the sweetness of it. As I stroked her cunt with my tongue, the taste was unimaginable. There’s no debate. Pussy is the greatest tasting thing on earth.

I starked stroking her pussy even harder to get the full flavor. The harder I licked her, the sweeter it tasted. I wasn’t used to eating pussy, so I assumed the deeper the better. Plus I wanted to get as far inside as I could. I could feel what was I was sure was my clit. This was when the sweet flavor of her pussy was magnified. She was breathing hard. She whispered, “oh, yea… right there. lick me right there baby”

I kept licking it as I felt the moisture increase ever so much. If she were wearing panties right now, they’d be soaked. I haven’t even got to the smell. Sweet is an understanding. The smell of a nice clean pussy is the greatest fragrance ever conceived. Plus, I admit that at this point, I was in love. I wanted to marry her and be with her forever. Eating and smelling the sweet juicy pussy of one you love is an unforgettable feeling.

I knew she was about to cum as I eat her out faster. I could hardly breath because I was licking her so fast. It was strange, as the beautiful pheromones were released, it was like I knew when she was gonna come. When she did, it was a gush of indescribable flavor. Her pussy was dripping with her sweet cum. All of her delicious pussy flesh was moist and gushing. Her breathing was intense. I placed her hands on her to massage her breast as I licked up her cum, when I did I noticed her heart racing. I assumed this meant I had done a good job. After she was finishing gushing her sweet fluid, I had a clump of her thick, sweet juice on the tip of her tongue.

To return the favor, I began making out with her. This way, she could know how her own savory juices tasted. By the look in her face, she thought it was delicious. Both of our tongues were basted with each others pussy fluid. The taste of vaginal fluid doesn't come off your tongue easily, so we both experienced each others unique taste.

At that moment after we satisfied each other, we were in a daze. After not drinking a lick of alcohol we were both dizzy and lightheaded. Perhaps the pleasure we both felt was just so overwhelming. We didn't move an inch from each others body. Time felt non-existent. As I looked off to the side, I saw out the window. It was already night. How long we were at this, I have no idea.
 
pics or gtfo

I can't draw... I mean...
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This is the best I can do
 
honestly, this reads like some horny 14 year old kid's wet dream. it's poorly written, the grammar and spelling are terrible and it's so riddled with trite ideas and clichéd 'porn' phrases that it's hard to take it seriously.

there's a sage piece of advice writers are often given: "write what you know". try that?

alasdair
 
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