Hopeless Victory

[New]

10 inch stiletto slipping through air
Cutting around the breath of the dare
The slicing blade sings as it whiffs o'er and right
Pointing directions that fill you with fright
The cold steel voice predicts harm at the helm
The quiet behind you makes this your own realm
Yours to live in - or yours to die trying
To claim what I take with the knife's constant prying
SLAAAAAASH! - First lick tastes warm and bitter
It seems that the battle has room for a quitter
But you press on, weighed down by a gash
Trying to protect what you have - quite rash.

 

[Mehm]

dude, your stuff is sooo descriptive i'm always down for a read when I see you have a thread. thanks again

 

[New]

Much appreciated.:D

I try to write how I feel.

 

[up all night]

I've read this quite a few times now and I like it more and more after each reading. There is a lot here I didn't fully appreciate the first time. There are some really original images and phrases. Nice work.