Homeland Rape

[echo off]

Mother nature clashes with humans
as human natures clash with guns
as guns turn their aim onto mothers
through the hearts of their homeland's sons.

Yet nature is our only real mother
and we should fight for it, with each other, against waste
and we should never forgive, on the land that we live
the giving, to life, a bad taste.

thats all that there is... it's simple, no more
i could go on for hours
but that would be a bore
so instead all i leave with
is this literary abhor
stop raping your mother, you need to spread your love more.

 

[Raz]

I really liked with the first verse how each line picks up where the last one left and the way it flows..

 

[crazyt]

I really enjoyed that.

Thanks for sharing

 

[colicolo]

i like this. simple, stern and yet cheerful.

 

[IXinX]

This is great.

Reminds me of a Bob Dylan or Fred Neil ballad.

 

[echo off]

many thanx to all