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[roarkisdead]

really rough draft, just looking for some feedback while i finish it
you sit and stare.
yes i look different.
i punched steel through my face.
tattoed my body, did drugs, fucked up.
i don't remember everything i did,
i didn't know every name.
yes i lived on the street
did what i could for money.
i never meant to hurt you,
never wanted you to cry.
hell i wasn't even alive.
what is done is done,
i am back now,
trying
still you yell.
can't you understand
forgive
accept.
what else can i do.
i'm sorry i'm back.
goodbye mom.

 

[E-girl]

this is something that goes through my head often... all the things i wish i could say to my mom, but cant. it hurts to keep it inside, but better me hurt than her. that's just how i feel. i dont know if you plan on her ever reading this, but your words are very powerful, and i hope that they dont haunt you forever like mine will.
*hug* from a friend

 

[frostyangel]

I understand where you are coming from, it's funny all these things we do, at the time went don't look around and notice that the ones we love are hurt and they are the only ones' the see we are starting to fall apart.
But, no matter what you mother will always love you, and she'll always forgive you!!
*hugs* from another friend

 

[up all night]

I like.

 

[harraser]

Im lucky in that my mum has always realised that mistakes are just that and that you learn from them and grow, the yelling never lasts for more than a day (or two )and I am so greatful that shes been able to understand....of course I could never say this to her
.......great work. just hold on, she'll calm down and though she may not understand one day she'll learn to accept.