hmm

[Cure or Disease?]

wounds of life scribbled on your back
implicate my soul
bare no hold
remorse without recourse
live to die, die to live
fight another day
cry to lie
fly so high
semblance in symbolism
i against i
eyes penetrate mine
caress of your glance
forgive me if i just.....
want
one
dance

 

[neverwas]

this was interesting. i like the last four lines best

 

[skjalff]

I enjoyed it! Minimalistic and I like how it goes from somewhat abstract rhymes in the beginning to request/apology in the end.



skjalff

 

[cherub]

Impressive work! waiting to see more

 

[RareForm]

great write!