His Kidney Stone was a Diamond in the Rough

[euphoricdork]

as i was saying, "the rain drops were disturbing me when i'd try to think of you"
somehow you knew i'd talk
even though my mouth wouldn't open
it came to my mind
like i read it off your shirt
"we all are laughing but no one is joking
and all our fathers just emerged from the dirt"
yet you understood
that i'll never understand
what i think i'm always understanding
bleeding from my tongue
"im confounded." says i.
chasing orgasms, defineing niches
nature spawned us sons of bitches
i'm comfortable with the sea, a boat and it's sails
if you see me howling at the wind
you might not see it blow
but she'll see you see me as she starts to wail

 

[neverwas]

i really really REALLY liked this!

i thought you had excellent choice of words and it had a sort of old feel to it. i also liked the way it was structured

 

[Altered_Soul9]

This is a lovely piece of writing. Very Nice.

 

[euphoricdork]

hey thanks, for taking the time to read and all