Hiding (Short)

[realm]

Hiding behind that fake smile
You wont be moving very fast
Stuck behind the dead skin
Feeling my breath as you clench fists
I write because it keeps me sane
You write to heal your pain
Pierce my soul with your stare
It's your only hope
Lose myself inside the rythym
Find myself inside your heart
It's a mistake not a regret
I defloured your spirit
Lost inside a memory

 

[m4dd0g]

'i defloured your spirit' - i especially like that, has a word of meaning in itself

 

[cherub]

Frist i love what i quoted,, that just sounds very real and truthful.

nice bit,, very real and raw to the heart !

I write because it keeps me sane
You write to heal your pain

 

[RareForm]

yes, bravo. quite fond of the end there.

 

[realm]

thanks for the feedback everyone! I'll be posting more poems really soon...