hey you

[jackie jones]

Powerful ending.

 

[Keepit Chill]

I really dont know what to say besides I loved it and it was VERY well written! Its almost like you can feel it when you read it, and in my opinion that is what makes it so great

 

[lostNfound]

Quality pull from the archives.

I haven't seen you write much in a while.

This is............wow.

It's awesome.

 

[katmeow]

Woman, write some more, please!

 

[up all night]

Wow, thank you for the bump, mdmantpa. I hadn't thought about this poem in years.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Agreed. Beautiful piece, I'm glad I had the chance to read it. Definitely the best of yours I've read to date.

 

[E-girl]

when i started to read this, i knew i heard it before!

UAN.... i miss ur words late at night.
My favorite will still always be "Cafe and Coffee Talk"

 

[New]

Beautiful. I'm not to think of another word to describe this.