Heaven's Well

[boywonder]

From the golden sun I fell
Into the depths of heaven’s well

Caught at sea without a sail
Got no key but locked in jail

In the depths of heaven’s well
One could also call it hell

Falling without freedom’s wind
Chained and plain, I cannot mend

I am not obscure, I cannot blend
Into the depths I will descend...
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This is just something I wrote awhile back when I was feeling pretty down. I wouldn't consider it finished, but the "juices" just stoped flowing for this when my smile returned. Would still love to hear some feedback!

 

[lostNfound]

A little misplaced, but I can see the idea is there.

Most of my better writing is done when im feeling a little down or after a few drinks.

Keep it up.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

i like the idea of heavens well, as if there is a dark place in heaven for anyone unfortunate enough to fall down.