SeventhSea
Bluelighter
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- Jul 14, 2023
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Base to Major Tom
Dosed twelve hundred micrograms
Have a safe landing
Dosed twelve hundred micrograms
Have a safe landing
You're supposed to use the last line of the previous Haiku, just a friendly heads up. Something like:Base to Major Tom
Dosed twelve hundred micrograms
Have a safe landing
"Buy the ticket; ride it" = 6 syllables, no?Have a safe landing
Buy the ticket; ride it
Stare at skies for stars
Ah yeah, missed a syllable there. Tx."Buy the ticket; ride it" = 6 syllables, no?
Why not this? ☞ "Buy the ticket, ride it home."
For that matter: '"Buy the ticket; take the ride"' directly quotes Hunter S. Thompson, and/but also works.
Breathe in the cool air
Drink the night, bare, like lights squared
Times Square, who goes there?
And wishes you wellMescaline-NBOme
Mister cactus shares his crown
And wishes you well
Something sharp and coldA winning combo
Shared among my hopelessness
Something sharp and cold
purchase copper cup
vintage i put gin in it
the fly green danish
Something sharp and cold
I grasp the icicle hard
Ice talon tendrils
Seeking warm new hosts
I am a human bed bug
Loving parasite