Gunpoint (Poetry, short)

[realm]

I stole your heart at gunpoint
But you wouldn't let go
You stole my gun with love
And released it from my evil grip
How do you sit?
With that glorious look on your face


See right through my flesh
Peeking at the truth
Finders keepers
Rules to live by
Cruelty is commonday chaos
Waiting for the world to fall apart


Living in fear is no way to live
Stop before it gets worse
I'm addicted to your sound

 

[RareForm]

that's what i'm talking about. exceptional.

 

[cherub]

I like this,, the analogies of this, are great,, expresses the feeling so well in this.. great work !

 

[realm]

thanks guys ill keep it comin!