Guitar Solo

[New]

Staccato pluck-and-tick neck-crack
Carbon-pop down each vertebra
Up-and-down the neck each press
Staves the vibration off into a mute
Gunshot of a wave at six-six-six-times-a-sixth
These thousands of thought-particles
Forming a wave to knock back the masses
Waiting for the extinction and fool them
Into stasis, waiting for nothing except
For forever to never end, frozen at a
Point where the potential for purity
Is engaged only by masses of imperfections
Assaulting and Mesmerizing those who
Weren't expecting the torrent to flow so smoothly.

 

[Raz]

Dude!! That is awesome! :D

I thought some of the capital letters were a bit random, but I love it! Lots of energy!

 

[stonerfromohio]

That was absolutely awesome. awesome. I love it .

 

[terrordactyl]

Man, everyone else is spot on by saying this is awesome. Talk about onomatopoeia, haha. I love the way the cadence of the whole thing feels like a verbal assault.

 

[Mehm]

Assaulting and Mesmerizing those who
Weren't expecting the torrent to flow so smoothly.

I especially like this bit

 

[New]

I guess I have manged to capture the essence of an epic guitar solo. Thanks for the compliments.

 

[ControlDenied]

yeh, thats great - a poem about guitar solos! haha, and you made a comment about a guitar solo in my magnificent scientology thread - the one starring brian-amp, remember? now that was epic. time of my life!!!!!!

 

[New]

It was an epic comment, after you made me take the 5 minutes to search for it.

 

[ControlDenied]

i didnt "make"you do anything. you made your own decision for yourself. :D

5 minutes jeez... i think they buried it because they fear i and, possibly, brian-amp.we are subvertors. the status quo bleeds into bluelight and into every facet of western culture.

so i read about rock stars.

 

[bone$aW]

^^right on CD. couldn't agree with you more....OP, this seems like it would be a great one to read at an open mic or something. it needs to be heard, not read, ya dig?

 

[Jabberwocky]

i enjoyed it as well. you need to read it at open mic and do an epic air guitar solo. weeeeeeeeer brewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

 

[haikod]

haha im jacking this solo to play in my song

 

[New]

I'd just like a credit, thank you.

 

[haikod]

too bad, it's going to be totally different ya know......

 

[New]

I am above ze law!

 

[haikod]

aye, captin

 

[(Wordy)]

Nice work, New.

Guitar solos have so much to answer for...

 

[(Wordy)]

Nice work, New.

Guitar solos have so much to answer for...

 

[New]

Thank you.