green glass door

[wesmdow]

green glass doors seem silly;
fitting stuff successfully...too difficult...

yellow umbrellas,
cigarettes,
bottled beer,
weed,
all acceptable,

peppers,
pennies,
pebbles,
pillows.

all good, all fitting green, shimmering glass.

feel free, green glass calls...

 

[(Wordy)]

To be honest, I'm not really sure what you're trying to do with this one? It seems pretty raw... maybe you need to expand upon it a little?

 

[wesmdow]

its a puzzle!

what can YOU get through the green glass door?

 

[wastedwalrus]

Haha I love it. Wordy... think outside the box man. It's completely abstract (and probably nonsensical without a good explination). Pretty funny too. I like it and think it's a very interesting shift from your usual stuff.

 

[not_broken_420]

I love it..played a game like that in my criminal justice class once. It took most people FOREVER to figure it out.

 

[blissfulMenace]

occasionally blissful... buddy... fill books full
stuff.... occlude... fatten... feed

billowing classified illumination, books will communicate...
occasionally collecting gullible followers

passively... sitting pretty...
books innovate consciousness

will do more tomorrow when my mind is a bit clearer... but for a start its w/e

 

[wesmdow]

ill commence discussion, encompassing all assortments... arrangements...endless possibilities!

gallavanting across fruitless terrain, running... approaching sunny bliss... 'till darkness falls...

soon, blackness dresses all.

 

[wesmdow]

occasionally blissful... buddy... fill books full
stuff.... occlude... fatten... feed

billowing classified illumination, books will communicate...
occasionally collecting gullible followers

passively... sitting pretty...
books innovate consciousness

will do more tomorrow when my mind is a bit clearer... but for a start its w/e

its good! i think its funny how you replaced words that "dont fit" with elipses

i didnt even understand it the first time i read it, but it grows, lol.

 

[wesmdow]

teensy green grass glimmers,
getting taller, swelling...

swallowing opposing walls, guzzling cobblestone streets...

approaching scintillating glitter. tomorrow, communites will fall.

wilderness will blossom, bloom, batton.

Trees will succeed. all opposition shall fall.

...grass needs food, too!

 

[yakksoho]

Beautiful, the words are as colours of thought.

 

[colicolo]

its different, i enjoy that

 

[wesmdow]

yall are supposed to make your own~

 

[not_broken_420]

Running free, wonderfully happy
Sweet green grass
Cool breeze caressing
Passing tall still trees
Stopping, collapsing, rolling, gleeful

It's short because of my lack of attention span at the moment. And I know "sweet" isn't usually associated with grass, but it sounds good haha

 

[9mmCensor]

this fucks with my head.

 

[wesmdow]

^silly noob, eventually itll happen effortlessly. youll see!

look between...

 

[**hAyzzZZ**]

It reminds me of what the teacher in donnie darko said to donnie, about the two most (intriguing, was it??) words in the human language were.

Cellar Door.

 

[wesmdow]

well, donnies' cellar door looks glassy, feels smooth...cool breezes seep between door/floor.

dilemma: accessing classified cellars...blessings? wickedness? crappy stuff?

who'll tell yall?

look deeper, you WILL see innumerable possibilities!