Gorgeous

[mariacallas]

I wrote this ages ago...maybe four years ago. I recently just found it again scribbled in a notebook I thought I had forgotten.

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Long before you even knew how to care
Your beautiful black eyelashes
Would indifferently flicker alongside
Stares so blissfully unaware
How you mesmerized all
You were gorgeous

Little by little each day you grew

Damp butterfly wings still at half mast
And because you were gorgeous
You took a bit of this and a bit of that
Because your hair shone shinier than most
You wanted more, and so you grabbed most
Lips and eyes reflecting the glint in yours
Your desires loomed beyond reason
Becoming insatiable

You whispered
Mesmerized at those hot young boys
Who, whilst staring through a million masks
still sing high pitched mating siren
calls in fast staccatto versions
Turbo fueled, no doubt
by loins leaded with white
Hot lust, only for
You so fucking
Gorgeous

 

[Jabberwocky]

i liked some of the imagery in this. The first stanza is particularly strong and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

 

[lystra]

nice poem

i particularly like the shape- reminds me of a tornado, pulling and sucking down to that last short line.... it seems swirl downward along with the meaning/message of the piece.

 

[Noodle]

*swoon*