goodbye

[roarkisdead]

now i say goodbye,
to the god that spawned us,
a mother that loved me
friends that cared
and a world that didn't.
long ago i swore always to be happy.
with promises of the future
memories of the past.
everything was within my grasp.
all my loves
all the good times.
remeber the time we played in the rain
we were young and happy
so full of life, so covered in mud.
now its all gone
it is raining now,
but no longer full of life.
i give no exscuse,
no note to say why.
just keeping a promise.
now i say goodbye

 

[harraser]

dont say goodbye, theres always hope. I really liked your work, chin up itll get better

 

[frostyangel]

*tear*

 

[Gondwanna]

The rain it may have turned
Your mood it may be burned
The life which you are yearning
Is YOURS to keep on churning
There is always a silver lining
Sometimes its just in hiding!!
HELLO TO THE NEW BEGINNING!!!!!!

 

[E-girl]

saying goodbye opens a whole new door of possibilites....

 

[up all night]

I really liked this and I can't pin down why. I just love the whole feel of it....the whole feeling behind it.

 

[Angelight]

don't give up on anything...everything has a way of coming together sooner or later. have hope.
good writing.
ange

 

[Professor Meowsa]

salivic ash spews wildly
with divintiy i pray to this porcelain god
this having been, not by illness, but chemical intent..
~*~ EuPhOriC iNtOxIcAtIon ~*~

 

[Young Alien Type]

Giving up and saying goodbye are two sepereate things. Goodbyes indicate new beginnings, giving up is just that.
Please, don't give up. :D