God's Temptation

[Altered_Soul9]

These are lyrics to song I wrote entitled ~~God's Temptation~~

Who do you worship?
Is your God even real?
Your dying inside.
Honestly, how does it feel?
Do you believe,
This Holy Man he died for you?
So, shed these tears made of glass.
I'll wipe them away and make you new.

Believe in me and I will lead the way.
Without the light to blind your face.
You need my hand to show you the way home.
You couldn't do it on your own.

Slowly you ponder.
Are my words even real.
Let me kill all your doubts
Honestly, I'll make you feel.
Just come closer.
I want to touch your sweet face.
dont' be afraid.
I mean to take you from this place.

Believe in me and I will lead the way.
Without the light to blind your face.
You need my hand to show you the way home.

You couldn't do it on your own.
You couldn't do it on your own.
You can't do it on your own.

 

[Deus Ex Machina]

I would love to here it one day. Awesome piece

 

[RareForm]

Nice, this is a good song.

 

[Pantomime7]

This song is awesome....If I may say so myself...... Some people may not get it or like it, but with guitars(my handiwork) behind it and drums, the lyrics flow like a river. Like they were meant to be. I love this write. I love these words; they really connect on many levels. Great write.

 

[cherub]

nice can't wait to hear it i really like the lyrics definately good work !

 

[galahan]

When I read it like a poem it was good.

Then I sung it in my head and it was "pretty damn good"