give up

[vurtomatic]

it always comes back to this
you and i, circles within circles

the few words you chose to hear
twisted by the cancer that replaced
particle by particle of you

wanting the world to feel your pain
i am caught in your maelstrom

it’s funny in a not-ha-ha way
you describing our connection
seems it’s only good for pain

full of pain and hurt you can’t contain
full of love and hope i can’t resist

don’t know when this will end
don’t know when i’ll stop loving you
don’t know when you’ll live again

one of us will have to stop
doing what we do
this losing battle

if only i could
give up

I don't know why it's become so hard between two people, I don't understand why it should hurt when we're no longer together.

 

[neverwas]

oh babe... *hugs* this was painfull to read it was so innocent and raw.

you are loved

 

[RareForm]

this was a terrific piece vurto....i really liked this one alot, worded perfectly in my opinion..i like the first part the best.

Thanks for sharing!

 

[cherub]

Big hugs first,

I know people wonder in life why things are the way they are and why people have the emotions in life that we do, it may not be fair but only can hope there is a reason behind it all.

ALways impressive writting hun!