Fuzzy (Opinions and Critique welcome and appreciated)

[SekeOlath]

Fuzzy brain
Thoughts flitter away,
No pain
happy silly,
Laugh some day
Fuzzy brain
knowledge still remains,
happy silly
all over again.
Happy silly gone
Thinking deeply
Still no pain
Anticipation rising steeply.
Will I learn that which I'm seeking
When I do will I feel like sleeping?
Silly brain,
Anticipating pain,
Smile on my face,
Happy again.
Forgetting the pace,
life's silly little race,
Thinking, writing, designing,
derailed thoughts,
and again I'm searching
for words.

 

[froggygirl]

Very original, rhymes well. Intresting, that's for sure!