funny how silence speaks sometimes when ur alone & remember that u feel

[RavinRaych]

funny how silence speaks sometimes when ur alone & remember that u feel

What about the night?
the day when the sun sets
and my heart explodes
to memories and memories
faded like another day gone by
And i wonder why life isn't so good
it never seemed so good
as those memories
that cure
that avoid the uneasy pain
of being alone
The day when enjoying every sensation
seems like it did at it's very best.
And the flag that represents our freedom
was no longer a rectangle of chosen justice
to chosen lives, in chosen parts of the world
Bound to the chains of people with no more importance than i.
The day
I wait for it to come
The day when the tainted smiles are erased
And equalization is not a matter of decision
But maybe i wait for the day
And the day will only be the moment before i die
Then i shall ask myself
What was i waiting for?

 

[~*Meg*~]

Excellent work!
But maybe i wait for the day
And the day will only be the moment before i die
Then i shall ask myself
What was i waiting for
^^^
Love these lines!

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"Weep not sad soul, nor forget, that sunrise never failed us yet."
"...and if the night runs over, and if the day won't last, and if our way should falter along this stoney pass, it's just a moment this time will pass." ~U2
"Stupidity has a knack of gettings its way" ~ Albert Camus

 

[ice-9]

wow, very good!
its easy to forget that everyone needs time to themselves.
thanks for the reminder.

 

[E-girl]

very inspiring. a friendly reminder of how precious memories are.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
Find one person you can count on forever, one person you can love forever, and one person you can be with forever... and if you're lucky, it will all be the same person.
"Live for the memories."

 

[yakksoho]

Helluva excellent man, keep it comin

 

[Slightly Fucked]

Its good to hear someone else can understand
that the day will never come. The day is ment to stay out of reach.
The day being the meaning of life.

 

[RavinRaych]

you guys are great, thanks a lot i appreciate it!
plurr
Raychul
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"I have measured my life in coffee spoons"

 

[Mellabopper]

excellent

i especially like the last few lines.
keep writing!
Mella