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[LostProphecy]

Romancing the fate
of a pleasureful youth
I shall sever this guilt
And breath venom, pull tooth.
Till my senseless ways ebb
and my wit shows promise, true
I shall stand fast with negligence
and bid the Powers, adieu.

 

[LostProphecy]

Well shit, I thought this was one of my better pieces...Still do, I just wish my perception could reach the masses...

 

[StuffedTiger]

I like it. I just finished 85 pages of verse and prose for a book I wrote and I think we have some of the same sensibilities.

 

[LostProphecy]

Thanks man. I would like to read your stuff sometime.

 

[StuffedTiger]

You probably will.

 

[TiberCross]

quit crying about your lost youth and grow the fuck up

 

[RareForm]

Hell yes. You should add more to this.

 

[LostProphecy]

quit crying about your lost youth and grow the fuck up

Um, It's not about lost youth, Dick.

 

[TiberCross]

i must be holding this poem up to the light so that when i read it, it becomes translucent and the words are imposed on me therefore allowing me to only see my own ineffectual upbringing reflected, sorry.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

The poem is the shit cuz, very nice

 

[LostProphecy]

i must be holding this poem up to the light so that when i read it, it becomes translucent and the words are imposed on me therefore allowing me to only see my own ineffectual upbringing reflected, sorry.

FYI, I always have and always will marvel at your intellect.