fuckshit mcgargle

[ForTheRush]

To all of those ive left behind
at least a piece of mine has reached your mind
you just need to reach and find
the part of me beseiged by time
the ribbon of time unravels and winds
theres no time to straddle your binds
when you could tread water instead of paddle and whine
follow the tide for the entire endeavor
riding your wave of life on the ocean of forever.............

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

HellYeah!

I'm not sure I have read exactly what you wanted to say here but what I have taken from this piece I am loving!!

So damn clever!

 

[ForTheRush]

Its about friends and people from my past who ive lost touch with or ceased contact with because of conflict and how a part of me is with them no matter how small till the end of time.....

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

thats what I thought - really enjoyed it!

 

[DarkPoet]

Intense and kinda punchy, I definately get the sentiment, there's lil' pieces of me scattered all over time and space