FUCK YOU!!!

[tosakarade]

What the fuck was i thinking?
Why wouldn't i listen?
They all tried to tell me.
Tried to make me see.
I said that i wasn't nieve
That to feel love you also had to feel pain
And though my head could see through your lies
My hearts cloud was impenetratable
I fooled myself into thinking
You were all you were and more
But really you turned out the lowest of scum,
A putrid pile of rotting lies
Used to jail me in my delusion
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I think poetry is written mostly for pleasure, by which I mean the pleasure of pain, horror, anguish and awe as well as the pleasure of beauty, music and the act of living.
~Kenneth Slessor~
[This message has been edited by tosakarade (edited 17 May 2001).]

 

[HexVenus]

*nods* i like.
and can relate a little too i think

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HV
**i never promised to be beautiful**
www.geocities.com/hex_venus/index.html

 

[+*DrEamEnStaR*+]

hey hun- whoa can i relate cause my ex lied and i didnt listen to my buddies which in tha end caused alot of pain that i didnt deserve. but ne wayz,i really enjoyed this poem...

 

[tosakarade]

Hey thanks guys......it's good to know people can understand and like my ravings

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I think poetry is written mostly for pleasure, by which I mean the pleasure of pain, horror, anguish and awe as well as the pleasure of beauty, music and the act of living.
~Kenneth Slessor~

 

[Noodle]

...the word disallusion threw me off....wanted to correct it to delusion.

 

[Noodle]

...mmmm...a joining of the prefix dis and the noun allusion?
*thanks in advance for the reply*

 

[tosakarade]

thanks for that noodle. thats what came to me as i wrote it and to go back and revise it i missed that mistake. i have a tendency to do that. once i put what i see fits there in when i'm inspired, it looks like it's right. So thanks again.
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I think poetry is written mostly for pleasure, by which I mean the pleasure of pain, horror, anguish and awe as well as the pleasure of beauty, music and the act of living.
~Kenneth Slessor~