"Frown Foot"

[human paraquat]

Your lady's feet are sad,
they frown,
in walking talk they to the ground.
And how it struggles back,
to please her,
don't it know how valleys grab
and hold her by her weakness there?

How I saw her fall,
this morning,
down and hard that moment how
her eyes sought out
her sad feet running,

frown foot lady fleeing by.

 

[RareForm]

this was pretty good....

 

[cherub]

I like the description it puts in my head as i read this!