~from a glance~

[neverwas]

she spins and she twirls
the pole as her back.
she dances and moves
like there isnt a care in the world.

you're temptress and creator.

around and around the silver she calls her love.
she moves like magic
exentuating her shape and her moves
floating on nothing.

she strikes a pose.

such energy in what seems like something so easy.
the envy of those who cant.
the idol of the guys who want.
the jealousy of the women they leave at home.

she looks you in the eye.

her hair it falls down over her face.
her disguise is her own flaw
as her hands slip and slide over her pole.
she moves around it with beauty.

such grace.

captivating in all she does
she glances at the dj to tell you shes done.
she takes a bow and whispers in you ear...

you're my specail one...see you soon my dear.

 

[onetwothreefour]

strike a pose.

*cough*

anyway, no, i really like this. obviously there's a context to this piece, and i think it captures the essence of the moment perfectly.

really good stuff kel

(and btw, you never replied to my six-month-old reply to your email pm that i sent. understandably. but still let'd d o coffee sometme ).

 

[Dekloren]

Sexy.

 

[RareForm]

this was wonderful...very different from what i usually read..

 

[frostyangel]

*muah*

Just have to let you know I always drop by... Luv ya!!

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

wow! this is amazing. i really really get/like this. thank you.

 

[neverwas]

thanx guys. this wasnt at its best when i wrote this. mainly cause i was sore from to much pole spinning. i actually came back today to re-word it but wont.

cheers for your replies.

strike a pose.

*cough*

anyway, no, i really like this. obviously there's a context to this piece, and i think it captures the essence of the moment perfectly.

really good stuff kel

(and btw, you never replied to my six-month-old reply to your email pm that i sent. understandably. but still let'd d o coffee sometme ).

*goes to check email* doh...i never did reply... we will do coffee soon hun. xx