Friends Like These

[RareForm]

Madman, lunatic-
A regular Manson on the loose.
Dazed Demonic Screwball-
crazed, psychopathic recluse.
Demented Crackbrain-
hangman with a noose.
Addle-brained sociopath-
paranoid, imbecilic excuse.

Toys in the attic-
another sociopathic case.
A bat, a coot, a loony toon-
an oddball's phrenetic pace.
Bats in the ole belfry-
an idiotic waste of space.
Going off his rocker-
“Queerfish” to my face.

A noncompos, a nut job-
the one you've come to fear.
Idiotic, chaotic maggotpate-
freakish homicidal leer.
Sanguine-eyed maniac-
crying in his beer.
Bug eyed, bloody butcher-
PERSONALITY OF THE YEAR.

 

[cherub]

I thought that this was definately clever work of yours

Very impressed,

* sorry haven't been around lately* Hugs!

 

[RareForm]

^thanks Cherub, I missed you..

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

very cool

 

[TiberCross]

i like it a lot.

 

[neverwas]

this was cute

 

[cherub]

Had to bump this up,,,,

Thank you,,,,,,,,,,

I can't help but giggle and relate at the same time

 

[froggygirl]

I liked it, very clever
It just kinda.. flowed.. I wish I could write cool stuff like that!

 

[RareForm]

you do write cool stuff, seriously, i don't comment for nothing

 

[froggygirl]

hehe.. thanks
I like your stuff a lot more than my stuff though
I really like this one, I've read it about 5 times now

 

[Dekloren]

Sounds like me!!

 

[Pantomime7]

This is a great use of words with a very nice pattern.