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katmeow

katmeow

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friday night brings
salt stains
and solitude
this familiarity
is breeding contempt

but like the tree falling
in an empty forest
if I cry alone
I can pretend
it never happened

I thought I'd found
my way off this
oft beaten path
but it's beating me
once again

so dust off that
well-worn mask
the art is in the
concealment of
the spreading cracks
 
That was such a beautifully sad piece kat... *hugs* Ive never read anything of yours, im happy this is the first. That was such a beautiful piece.

Hope your doing ok...
 
wow! that was amazing....simply amazing...you wrote this one to perfection girlie,

i loved this one to death :D
 
It's the curse of the uni student I tell you, to sit back when they should be socialising and over analysing their situation.

*hugs*

This is awesome.

(psst, penis! ;) )
 
<3

Originally posted by katmeow
friday night brings
salt stains
and solitude

^This was truly beautiful. :)
I really enjoyed this piece, and I agree, the stanza's flowed and pieced together just perfectly.
Well done.
 
Friday nights are not made to hold your sadness and it never knows how to deal with crying girls. Save your sadness for Sunday and the long drive home. Hope you're okay babe.

*hugs* [god internet hugs are lame]
 
so dust off that
well-worn mask
the art is in the
concealment of
the spreading cracks
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theres only so much you can hide behind the mask before it falls off totally. Kat you are a very dear friend of mine, we've been through heaps together...i only wish i could be there to take you out to coffee when your mind starts to run away from you and things get to much :\

[insert mass snuggles here]

ps: call me if you want :) my mobile is always on!
 
Girl definately one of your best pieces, unfortunately it sounds like coming from alot of pain inside.

Great work :)
 
Thanks for the feedback :)

when your mind starts to run away from you and things get to much
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I'm doing ok, just a temporary setback in negative thought processes... that pretty much sums it up stars... sometimes I think far too much for my own good.
 
Thinking too much is the folly at times but it can be positive, you have to accept the fact that such a thing can not only project you to great heights but also make you feel like you're plunging further down. Or that you're not breaking some negative cycle.
 
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