Friday night finds me

[bluegirl]

Friday night finds me
By your side
And driving

Through the rain
The pale orange
Lights are brilliant

At one hundred
Kilometers
Per hour

Like my thoughts
And words they
Slip by us easily

Aborted attempts at
Conversation slide
Beneath the wheels

I can hear them
They speak louder
Than this silence

I hold myself close
And wonder if
You notice

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sometimes you can be with someone and still feel so alone,
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[up all night]

Oh boy do I feel this one...

Great work.

 

[neverwas]

I hold myself close
And wonder if
You notice

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sometimes you can be with someone and still feel so alone,

hun i know that feeling all to well...i empathised with the pain through this so easily...

the last line you wrote really made me fight back tears.

nice work.