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freedom in emptiness

skjalff

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To walk unnoticed through the snow-veiled streets
just a grey track-mark among the snow flakes

to forever burn this image into the eyes
and to not be recognized ever again


...this is called joy


to never again care
and let this street become the final resting place

to let this greyness perpetuate through the mind
and into the feelings


..colorlessness


to never be saturated by it
and ever make space for more

till its all monochromatic
till there is nothing left to give up


..but there is always something


to get drained of color
desecrating all that was once held dear

to tear through the old scarred seams
and dissolve in this winter day


..that is true loyalty


to completely and permanently share the moment
with emptiness, tranquil and absolute

to welcome the oblivion
that was so hard-suffered for


..thus comes my ultimate freedom





skjalff
 
skjalff said:
To walk unnoticed through the snow-veiled streets
just a grey track-mark among the snow flakes

skjalff said:
to forever burn this image into the eyes
and to not be recognized ever again


skjalff said:
till its all monochromatic
till there is nothing left to give up

skjalff said:
to completely and permanently share the moment
with emptiness, tranquil and absolute

These are my favorites parts, I really liked this poem alot, i know this feeling ALL TO WELL...you wrote it asbsolutely perfect...you're such a great writer..Keep it up my friend :)

Thanks for sharing! :)

~Drew
 
This is great! I love the flow and the meaning. Very creative and thoughtful. Love it! Props!
 
This is great! I love the flow and the meaning. Very creative and thoughtful. Love it! Props! Bump....
 
First haven't seen you in awhile

*Big Hugs*

yes I think is one of your best pieces yet. Doesn't surprise me with your push to reach new levels ;)

yeah definately has a kind of zen almost feel to it... :) :)
 
I love your work. It almost reminds me of a black and white photgraph, so beautiful and full of simplicity! awesome
 
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