For Sell

[Altered_Soul9]

Pain numbs her hands as she glances into the mirror.
The once hidden scar opens up and pours the black blood of memories.
The bruises reappear on her forehead.
She thought she was rid of them.
His teeth glisten in the background
She thought she was rid of him.
The crushing blow of love comes across her face.
Over and over and over and over.
She lifts her face up off the floor to realize its gone.
The secret life of the enchanted woman grows thin with disgust and lust.
The loving way of many men replay like a tape in her mind.
She cries tears of ash and fire.
She know not how it started,
Only how it ends.
~The smoothness of the ride, the sudden halt, blackness all around and then......

The warmth of his love fills her up....

 

[froggygirl]

Pain numbs her hands as she glances into the mirror.
The once hidden scar opens up and pours the black blood of memories.
The bruises reappear on her forehead.
She thought she was rid of them.
His teeth glisten in the background
She thought she was rid of him.
The crushing blow of love comes across her face.

beautiful

I couldn't figure out which lines I liked the best.. I'm impressed

 

[Pantomime7]

This is vivid. great writing. Haven't heard from you in awhile

 

[TiberCross]

excellent writing my friend. no really, i really enjoyed this. i'm gonna try and give a more explicit meaning of why i like this so much. well, basically it sounds like a beautifully subversive suicide note.

 

[KaideAlike44]

Looks good enough for song lyrics.

 

[cherub]

very sad piece with a very decisive type of writting clear to the point. good write

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by Altered_Soul9
The secret life of the enchanted woman grows thin with disgust and lust.
The loving way of many men replay like a tape in her mind.
She cries tears of ash and fire.
She know not how it started,
Only how it ends.

^You have an amazing mind. Giving, and honest and raw.
I loved this. Confronting and beautifully poetic. Painted a mottled picture for me.

 

[RareForm]

Yeah, I definitely got this one, the actual true meaning you were trying to convey....but it is also interchangeable in what people can interpret that's why i like it so much....

Good Write.

Thanks for sharing!