for a dear friend...

[neverwas]

another day breaks
and once again you awake.
wondering why you're still alive
forever questioning
the reasons
i always try to shake.

as my night rolls by
and your day begins to unfold.
i think of you
and all your troubles.
i shed a tear for you.
for your misery
as you let it take control.

no one can change your life.
none can mend your broken heart.
but as you go through your day,
as it folds into another night.
remeber all your happy times,
forgetting only the bad.
soon you will love again.
and those feelings
you crave so much,
will unfold infront of you.
right into your hand.

be patient
let fate take its own course.
let them start searchig for you
in the end
you will have your reward.

all your friends love you.
even though to you,
it may not show.
so shake ur frown
and give a smile.
and let our friendship
once again
be all that you need.

 

[brothermarcus]

 

[frostyangel]

beautiful....*claps*

 

[Rollingrrl]

oh honey, I felt like you were saying all of this to me, in person. the words just leap off the page, old saying I know. But it felt like that, like someone was reading it to me in my head and I could hear the nuances of their voice as they read over the parts.

I also like the continuing of the night/day movements. Night rolls by, day unfolds and it rearranged and repeated in the next stanza. very neat style, I do love it a lot.

and this was exactly what I needed to read right now, thanks!

~Shelly~

 

[Mean Girl]

Kel

Sweety, this is fucking fantastic. Make sure you hang onto this, I'll want to read it and go "aww" again in a few years.

*applauds*

 

[Cosmic Mist]

niec work kel - you know i dig your work. this time around you cut close to home as well.

nice. :D

 

[neverwas]

i felt like bumping this one. its for a friend/now former bler who has passed away...

always thinking of you xox

 

[SouthernChildGal]

Very nice