Flow me a Line

[Tribal Hybridz]

can you feel it in touch,
or do you shiver by flow,
can you kiss and make thunder,
do ya wanna know, hold my hand and go..
goose bumps ripple as i kiss your nipple,
takin my time to make it all simple.
forgive me, i move to groove,
i hug to hold, i kiss to sooth.
i feel to know your real,
lips communicate to seal the deal.
dont game me, and i wont game you,
liquid sky blue eyes u stare into,
listenin to the flow-line tru.
nothin special bout kidz like us,
so we can fly, we still ride tha bus.
no need to live in greed,
when we already planted the perfect seed.
theres no up and down,
just circle and clown around.
bounce theory tested and approved,
once again, to feel my groove.
cmon lets go, no time to waste,
toungue's gettin excited for that natural taste.
Bonnie n Clyde, in a 02 pimp ride,
across the U.S. 99 mph we'll slide.
i quit the drugs to keep my pride,
and you do whateva, im still atcha side.
just be tru to me, ill be tru to you,
then we have fun, no matter what we do.
from cookin food to gettin high,
we'll have a blast, neva to sigh and say goodbye.
all you gotta do is look into my eye,
and let me know in you i can confide,
and wings are healed, togetha we fly..
Peace.

 

[star*]

Nice title! hehe
I thought this waz gonna b where other ppl could add a few lines of there own....u know like u said 1 time b4....dunno if u remember or not.
but anywayz,

forgive me, i move to groove,
i hug to hold, i kiss to sooth.
i feel to know your real,
lips communicate to seal the deal.
I luv that!

 

[Tribal Hybridz]

you dont think thats the whole thing do you? go ahead, finish the other half off. i neva finish my writings,im usually half baked and end up ending it with some subject totally different then what i started with. so i usually stop wheneva i use the word "fly".but you are more than welcome to continue writin any of my poems.
i usually leave the door open behind me,even when i dont mean too.

 

[Siany]

I love the way you write... the way you rhyme is incredible and your words do exactly that.. they flow. Put to tunes this would be even more fantastic!