Flames

[Taliana]

Im Flawed and vengeful
Burning up with my dried tears
and blurred vision

Its rainbow stripes and black thoughts
that fill my being

Your thoughtless and ignorant
Blind to my roaring emotions
For they dont speak through words,
they burn wild flames
and talk through the wailing flames tongue

Drowning in the hunger of confrontation
filled with that pure vengeful anger
Solitude must prevail
Solitude must prevail

Hiding behind the deadlocked door
In a bed full of rose thorns
Solitude must prevail

Solitude will prevail

 

[Dekloren]

It's worked for me!

 

[neverwas]

excellent

 

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

You had me at hello. Oh wait that wasn't in here... nevermind...

Very well done, I liked "It's rainbow stripes and black thoughts, that fill my being". Wow, that says so much.

 

[katmeow]

Loved the imagery you present in this one. Really nice work

 

[cherub]

Great description in this writting, really keeps the reader interested.

 

[Siany]

Very well done, I liked "It's rainbow stripes and black thoughts, that fill my being". Wow, that says so much.

That's what I thought too. Good work Tal

 

[up all night]

Vulnerability and strength in one piece of writing... Awesome work, babe.

 

[doofqueen]

wow! that was awesome. i love how you use metaphors the way you do!

 

[RareForm]

excellent imagery....so very flawless...I really loved this poem to death..."solitude must prevail", "solitude will prevail" so very poignant...you have quite an exceptional way with words, i almost want to kiss you

thanks for sharing!

 

[Taliana]

Thanks thanks thanks guys... You know, i wrote this on monday night in a shitty place, i was fine by tuesday.

I havent been so down in MONTHS, which means i havent written anything in months and months. Its good to get such a great response.

Ive really been trying to use imagery in my writing... thanks for noticing. and rareform...well, im in australia so if you ever drop in for a visit... u can give me a kiss then. thatd be nice.